by PS Oct 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I miss you, i want you but |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Nice poem. it won 5th place in my contest. it was hard to judge but i decided that your poem deserved a placing. great work. keep up your skill. |
by Laura
I really liked this style used for this write. I alway find it difficult to write in this style with the same ending for each stanza...but yu have demonstrated here that it can be done with a great flow and packed with emotion! Very well done, very enjoyable read. |