Love past

by Flaminia   Oct 14, 2006


I'll tell you nothing more
and once again will let you go,
passed my memories and tears,
up to my inside fears.
Back to my youth
where present lost dreams
were truth.
Words flow ahead of time,
let my love history rhyme,
through your past unique mistakes
to the ones everyone still makes,
believing in love at first sight
when you're too young to know what love's really like.
Erase and rewind,
although our love was kind,
firsts love get past,
they never mean to last.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was another nice poem!
    the flow was really good...
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    That was A sweey poem, very nicley placed and very cute..like a little spill of feelings. Great job:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Wow, I liked this one, the ryhtm is superb combined with the thought provoking lines..the result-a well written poem full of emotions..
    For sure many out there can relate to this one..

    keep on writing on what you feel and like

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I don't understand why this is voted so low, but i think that it is very well written. Even though the lines are varying in size, i think it works well for this poem and flows nicely. Thats my opinion. A good write, with a sad touch to it. The ending, is sad, but pretty true. Well, with me it is anyway. Great write. Keep it up! =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Though some lines are short and long i think poem is good and i really apprecaite the way how u write god bless

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