Aww it was short but its really good. 5/5 check out mine! =>

Though some lines are short and long i think poem is good and i really apprecaite the way how u write god bless

I don't understand why this is voted so low, but i think that it is very well written. Even though the lines are varying in size, i think it works well for this poem and flows nicely. Thats my opinion. A good write, with a sad touch to it. The ending, is sad, but pretty true. Well, with me it is anyway. Great write. Keep it up! =] 5/5

Wow, I liked this one, the ryhtm is superb combined with the thought provoking lines..the result-a well written poem full of emotions..
For sure many out there can relate to this one..

keep on writing on what you feel and like

That was A sweey poem, very nicley placed and very cute..like a little spill of feelings. Great job:)

This was another nice poem!
the flow was really good...
keep it up!