by nikki Oct 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I don't know this feeling, |
by Miranda
Good poem.It had a couple spelling mistakes and the flow was a little off,but great meaning.And it showed a little bit of emotion,not a lot though.I give it a 4/5 for a good effort and a great meaning.Keep it up. |
Good poem! The flow could use some work, and in the third and fourth lines, they are too close in wording to each other... All in all, awesome job and keep up the great work! |
by Stephanie
Hehe, that was cute. I like the way you kept guessing in the poem, made us anticipate the answer more! Good job! :) 5/5 Loved it! Keep it up! |
I like it . A couple typos, but it`s kcoo . |
One typo-- it's nowadays, not 'now a days'. |