It had like a shakespear spin to it, I like the use of your vocabulary, very nice!! Karms.

I think u are a good write! well, keep up the good work and keep on writing and sharing ur very nice poets 5/5

god bless

Love it! 5/5

~Kristina

Amazing.. Nothing Bad i can say-except i need to improve my vocabulary.. Amazing. i was blown away. youre one of those few people i think Bob would say can actualyl write love poems.

Wow...amazing stephen...not anyone call pull off a shakespearian poem!
and u did so with flying colours!
i had to look up wat "sere" meant..:P
hehe..
loved the last stanze...
a 5/5 from me...again...=D

I adore this..
I enjoyed the language you used, it created an impression.
The imagery created vivid pictures, while the flow was good throughout.
The wording was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.
You did an excellent job with this, you should be proud.