No More Brides Maid

by Willow   Oct 15, 2006


She was going to be my brides maid,
She was going to be my best friend.
I was going to hold her when she was afraid,
I was going to be there for her till the very end.

I was going to look after her,
And be the big sister she would want me to be.
I was going to make her proud,
And she was going to look up to me.

I was going to wipe her tears away,
And she was going to grow up without depressive pain.
I was going to tell her the things I went through one day,
And I was going to take her hand and dance like a little child in the rain.

But all this can only be a dream,
For this sister will never be.
I will never hear her playful scream,
I will never hold her while her dreams run free.

She will never be my brides maid,
And she will never fell my hug.
I will never need to keep her fears away,
And she will never be my little lady bug.

I was going to be her shoulder to cry on,
But now it's me who is crying.
All these dreams are gone,
And now my heart is dieing.

~My mum is pregnant and we were all so sure it was going to be a girl. Then at the latest scan we found out it's a boy. There is no other way that thing on it could have been something else. Now my heart is dieing and so is my mum's. I'm scared she is going to get post-natal depression because I'm her only daughter and i have two brothers already. this will be the 3rd brother. I would like to know what u think of this poem. Support would be wonderful but so would criticism. love willow xxoo~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Littl3Pickl369

    I relly like this one to, you havea gift:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, it was sad. so good tho.
    Possibly you could learn to love him just because it isn't a girl doesnt mean you can't have fun or do all those things with. you can still love them, and you never ne it can turn out a girl.

    I was supposed to be a boy but im a girl...
    Stay strong.
    Much love.
    Amberinaa*

  • 18 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    I agree. This is really touching. It's really amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    OMG, I feel for you. :( That's a really touching poem. I know I can't tell you how you should feel or anything like that, but maybe you can still learn to love your new brother? And boy/girl brother/sister relationships don't have to be all bad. My little sister and I are closer than my little brother and I, and my best friend's a girl too, so don't think everything'll fall apart just because you can't have the same relationship with him. I mean, I know, honestly, that it's not the same, but you know, think of him as a fresh start you couldn't have with your other two brothers. If I'm way out of line here, sorry, just my IMHO. Now poem-wise, maybe it's an alternate spelling in some places, but I spell "dieing" as "dying." Just a minor detail, otherwise I loved it. xoxo
    Harris

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