Comments : You weren't the father you could of been.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard to Say

    Wow! this poem is truely amazing!! n doubt it really is a beautiful beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great work but it feels like its missing something but i love the feeling of it its like you create a memory that comes back to the reader whenever they read it but their are some fuzzy parts great work though 4/5