by ForbiddenDreams Oct 15, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
We will not be the sun to end the night |
by NeferNoir
I am so glad I ran into your poems... This poem especially.. Amazing... The depths of imagination and emotion is written so beautifully... 5/5! :) |
Wow, the symbolism lurking behind the words here is eerie. It hints at something I can't quite put into words. Funny, it evokes a feeling as all good poems do, but I can't put my finger on exactly what that feeling is. I like the way the next stanza continues on from the last, like a pause in the middle of a sentence. 5/5 for me. |
by Lady Nik
Great poem i loved it, it was so deep . keep it yp shanik |
by monika
Nice poem very emotional :) |