Nice poem very emotional :)

Great poem i loved it, it was so deep . keep it yp shanik

Wow, the symbolism lurking behind the words here is eerie. It hints at something I can't quite put into words. Funny, it evokes a feeling as all good poems do, but I can't put my finger on exactly what that feeling is. I like the way the next stanza continues on from the last, like a pause in the middle of a sentence. 5/5 for me.
Let the Force hang loose,
Matt

I am so glad I ran into your poems... This poem especially.. Amazing... The depths of imagination and emotion is written so beautifully... 5/5! :)