This is very good for a first poem. my first poem is like 3lines. readit its called family tree by jessica

Really really good i understand wat u went through. but wat happened 2 her???

Lol i meant the mother like i got really confused. y was she sleeping?

Ohhhh ok soz im pretty blonde. (even tho im brunette) lol yerrr n e way.

Aww i love it :)