Confusion.

by BeautifulxMess   Oct 15, 2006


Why do I try when I know I can't?
Why do I make my life so great when I feel like an ant?

Who am I to kid, I just want a friend. Every time I ask for one
I'm reunited to the end.

How many rodes am I going
to have to take? What's
going on with my mistake?

Did I let you down, because
I bet I did. My grades and
what I say isn't good enough
just admit it.

You know it's true; I'll never
be good enough. Just tell that
to my face and lie about this
stupid love.

How many more tears are
going to fall from my face.
How much agony is this
crimson heart going to place?

Unprotected from growing up.
Maybe it's not too late;
I guess it's just a sip from
a poison cup.

Keep me from falling to
the floor. Bet you can't do that
like you did before.

Before my life fell apart.
Before my broken shatter heart.

Daddy when did we go wrong?
Before I found out the truth
I was strong.

My soul has fallen into a
bottomless pit. Nothing to
live for, if there is then what
is it?

Father from birth; you left
me so young. The young
and the restless is just how
life begun.

Piggy tails and ribbons in
my hair. With flowers
everywhere.

I miss how much I was
happy. Listen to me
please my daddy.

I'm not daddy's little
girl. I never been never
will be in the world.

Unspoken desires,
never to be revealed.
Not a dad in my life,
my heart can't be healed...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Unspoken desires,
    never to be revealed.
    Not a dad in my life,
    my heart can't be healed...

    wow definitely my fav stanza! very powerful ending, bravo... you can feel the pleading in the poem, the reaching out... good job

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    5/5 great poem thanks for comment on "My hang up" keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah! As people have said before, its a very emotianal peice of writing. So meaningful. Wow.. Just wow. Its great! Keep it up! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Very emotional and it did make me cry, takes a lot to do that so this poem really is good :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, i can relate, i like your style of writing, and i thought the flow and imagery was very good. 5/5