by damaged rose Oct 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Hearts are broken by words left unspoken, |
Nice.6/5 |
by Freddie
That was realli gud, i agree with the above comments. u shud keep writing. 5/5. |
I agree with RainbowSlider, the first line was deff. the best. the entire poem was wonderful though. it has alot of emotion behind it. |
I especially liked the first line. |