Comments : Unspoken Desired

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I especially liked the first line.

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    I agree with RainbowSlider, the first line was deff. the best. the entire poem was wonderful though. it has alot of emotion behind it.
    comment some of my stuff sometime.
    -farah

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    That was realli gud, i agree with the above comments. u shud keep writing. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Nedinne

    Nice.6/5