Satisfaction [Pleiades]

by Tammie   Oct 15, 2006


She smiles at the boy,
Slyly with a quick wink
Suspecting he will fall
Stupidly for her. Then
Shyly ask her out, just
So she can reject him.
Satisfaction achieved.

* My first Pleiades, so please criticise. =] I decided to put this in this catagory, because life can be like that at times. If you have any suggestions for what catagory it should go in, please leave comment. Thanks. *

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wowee-- I've only dont this style of writing once... but it didn't turn out too good. ;P Tehe! ..For your first try, you did an amazing job. I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought it was very good for your first attempt at this style, and the ending was powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Very interesting poem and style of poem, I liked it and I think theres no problem with what category it is in, good work...
    Karms.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hmmm... I think Im gonna play around my fingers with this style..sounds interesting.
    Good for you trying out different kinds of poetry it shows your ability to scribble your thoughts down.

    couldnt wait for your next poems.
    :-)

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