Hmmm... I think Im gonna play around my fingers with this style..sounds interesting.
Good for you trying out different kinds of poetry it shows your ability to scribble your thoughts down.

couldnt wait for your next poems.
:-)

Very interesting poem and style of poem, I liked it and I think theres no problem with what category it is in, good work...
Karms.

I thought it was very good for your first attempt at this style, and the ending was powerful.

Wowee-- I've only dont this style of writing once... but it didn't turn out too good. ;P Tehe! ..For your first try, you did an amazing job. I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``