Love & Hate [Tetractys]

by Tammie   Oct 15, 2006


Love
And hate
Are really
Different, but
There is a fine line between them.

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Tetractys consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20).

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  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    I really liked this poem, The message is so true too, I find the only people You can hate are those You love, as nobody else can hurt You as much.. excellent 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very well said. ;P

    I like this style, and I just had to comment it for you, tehe. It was nicely done, you followed the rules, and managed to get your message across. Well done! Keep it up.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Short, simple, straight to the point, and it has meaning behind it. Excellent. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Very simple and short yet you got your point across and thats why I gave a 5/5... Nice work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ive never attempted to write this kind of poetry, for sure youve make it look easy..

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like Tammies..youre getting better and better.