Ive never attempted to write this kind of poetry, for sure youve make it look easy..

Keep on writing on what you feel and like Tammies..youre getting better and better.

Very simple and short yet you got your point across and thats why I gave a 5/5... Nice work...

Short, simple, straight to the point, and it has meaning behind it. Excellent. 5/5

Very well said. ;P

I like this style, and I just had to comment it for you, tehe. It was nicely done, you followed the rules, and managed to get your message across. Well done! Keep it up.

Natalie``

I really liked this poem, The message is so true too, I find the only people You can hate are those You love, as nobody else can hurt You as much.. excellent 5/5 xx