Rules Of The Heart

by amber   Oct 15, 2006


This crack in my heart
won't ever heal
I think it's time I tell you
how I really feel

I fell in love with your lies
I lived on your distrust
and I never guessed
that I wasn't enough

I was there for you always
and I loved u so much

but now that its over
I look back
and I see

What a fool I was
to think that
you'd ever give your heart

to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel

    I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate.

  • 17 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Been there done that bought that t-shirt and matching hat. boys are very munipulative and i hate my ex for doing things like that to me. nice job, the stanzas were broken up into wut u wanted to stand out the most i can tell. i liked the ending and how u kept everything simple even tho we kno it has deeper meaning. thx for the comment,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    Hi Amber thank you for reading my poem. The best part about being young and falling in love is that time does heal all wounds. I lost my love 2 years ago. I wish that I could go back and change any hurt that I might have caused. But one thing I never did was cheat I think it`s the worst thing that anyone can ever do. I wish you good luck and please don`t give up on trust. This was a very good poem keep up the good work you have a talent for speaking from the heart.5/5
    Drew