by amber Oct 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
This crack in my heart |
by Angel
I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!! |
This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate. |
This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate. |
Been there done that bought that t-shirt and matching hat. boys are very munipulative and i hate my ex for doing things like that to me. nice job, the stanzas were broken up into wut u wanted to stand out the most i can tell. i liked the ending and how u kept everything simple even tho we kno it has deeper meaning. thx for the comment, |
by Drew
Hi Amber thank you for reading my poem. The best part about being young and falling in love is that time does heal all wounds. I lost my love 2 years ago. I wish that I could go back and change any hurt that I might have caused. But one thing I never did was cheat I think it`s the worst thing that anyone can ever do. I wish you good luck and please don`t give up on trust. This was a very good poem keep up the good work you have a talent for speaking from the heart.5/5 |