Awww...

I luv this soo much...

ur really talented...

I luv the message tht it sends too...its like don't give up and do what u wnt...

5/5

if u can plz read my poem called

Rules of the Heart

I just wrote it and could use some feedback

plz&thx

Sometimes things just dont go the way we want it to be huh? nice poem 5/5

Aww hun, this is a really good poem! The emotion you expressed throughout it is amazing. I can relate to it. The last stanza was really good, and finished the poem nicely. Another great poem by a great writer. Please keep it up, i love reading your poems. =] 5/5

Tammie xo