by Mommy And Me Oct 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Follow The Moonbeams [Part 2] |
by aDORKable x3
E-con, I like the alliteration in the second stanza. another note: all you have to do is delete those question marks, but otherwise, very well written... |
by xxmichaelxx
Wow! how can you write not rhyming but still good to read! great job! |
by Deana
Very sad,If any one has ever sat in a hospital room watching a heart monitor they can relate to this, I`m thankful mine didn`t end this way,good job. |