Comments : Lies

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarahh

    I really loved this poem!! it was so sweet bad sad aswell
    i can so relate to this right now...
    ive been through somethin like this....
    i love it

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    This is beautifully sad!!! its bitter sweet...i love your rhyme scheme and can relate to how your feeling....def keep up the good work
    andi