Love Scrutiny

by sчиτнєτι¢__x.   Oct 15, 2006


-Love Scrutiny-

Hallow holes engulf shattered heart
Pins and needles itch beneath skin
Butterfly's flutter middle of tummy
Knees collapse down to the ground

Chaotic thoughts replay from start
Embracing emotions laying within
Love scrutiny battles so aimlessly
Failing to see who's love's around

15th October 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. Though I think you were a little to abstract. Maybe you could relate it to the topic more.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    I rly like this one its rly rly good 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow this is the one i most likely like... not too long but very impressive and intresting it written so well and flow was good love it5/5

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