I really enjoyed your poem, quite sad. i sumtimes feel the same yet dont talk bout it, n understand life is hard. your technique is great as it tells a story and makes you want to read on. keep up the great work. *laura* xoxo

Good poem mate
very true

Such a sad poem, I especially love the last stanza, because it is true for so many. Very nicely written.. excellent 5/5 xx

Wow...
A very very chilling ending
The flow and rhyming were excellent!
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I think you write beautifully.

Wow, that was amazing! Great poem, very well written!
Keep it up 5/5

Wow amazing poem...love it

My friend hung himself on sunday.... so i have no idea why im reading suicidal poems.... i think its sorta like all teenagers have problems... and its not bout what theyre facin today, its bout their childhood.. u either learn to live with it, run from it, or give up..

.. nice poem..
5/5