IN THE END

by Rocky   Oct 15, 2006


So
Here in the end I am
Falling
Crying
Grieving
My hearts gone so cold now
Frozen tears it is weeping
For even though
Entombed in sadness
My soul still marches
Across the night sky
Laughing blackened tears
It is yearning
For an angel Left behind
So distant I wonder
If she still hears
My haunting cry
As
I LOVE YOU
I love you
I love you...
I scream
Across this dark
and lonely night

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  • 15 years ago

    by Second to None

    Wow that was really good. many can relate.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    In THe End this could be a very broad term and the usage of the thought could be grand, but I found it rather dissapointing, I was really hoping for some Apocoliptic thought or something like that but just an end of a relationship well hmmm what can I say Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    I really REALLY like your way of writing. =]
    style is unique and as i said, reminds of james frey. but that book is fantastic so thats def a compliment!!! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    That poem was amazing, it really caught my interest 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Wow that poem just grabbed me u know.. it had so much feeling to it and the words and ideas u had in it were amazing. i loved how you repeated "i love you" at the end, and i think what would make it even better would be if you used kirstens idea. Because then it's like its fading away, and that somehow (i dont quite know how to say it) would well like seem more strong, and suck the reader in even more and maybe even give them goosebumps! lol i hope u understand what i mean!! 5/5 :D

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