I can tell u really love her dont u. thats really kool

Wow..awsome poem.....i luved the second part....very awsome keep on writing!

Wow really good poem it was well thought out

Excellent poem, well written and enjoyable to read; Who has been betrayed
and cast down
unto this hell
where these demons play
Best fits my life, great job 5/5 your friend Tracy dean

Well in humbling yourself to the Goddess you did well putting her on a pedistal but the quest I have is how and why was she fallen Plot121