by Rocky Oct 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
So there i was |
by Robert
This was a good poem but I think you drug it out way too long. I liked the flow the message, but I think if you made some exsamples of why you felt you shouldn't die some contempt to God or even worry about your lost love this would be a profoundly powerful poem just a thought Plot121 |
I love it! u r such a good poet she is lucky u kno |