by katie! Oct 15, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I was 14 years and 9 months old when I first clapped eyes on Godden Green Clinic. |
Me too please let me know when u write the rest! it was intiguing! really good! |
This was really good. I hope you post the next few pages because when i finished reading this, i just wanted to keep going. Keep writing! =D |
by Laura
Katie I think this is a magnificient start...I liked how you started with the present and then kinda went back to tell the story of how the character ended up in the present. Let us know when you post another page so we can continue to read as you write! |
by Lu
You have captured my interest with this read Katie as you have also captured my heart many months ago with your heart warming personality . |
by Cuddles
From one writer to another, it sounds like an excellent beginning. Nice job! |