This was dark- i loved it! I hate that we dont always live the way we want to live- and in a way live the way people expect us to- thats what i got from this- maybe thats just what im feeling today lol good job.. ur free to red mine as well- they might be a little twisted

THIS ONE FREAKIN ROX! BEAUTIFUL!

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I don't really know what to say about this one. I didn't fully understand it. Even after I read it through twice. I'm sorry if I didn't quite catch a metaphor that you were trying to portray, but I just didn't see it. I apologise.

But what I can comment you on is the beautifully worded stanzas. They were wonderful. They had such passion and emotion in every word put together. Do NOT change the stanzas lol. They're like...perfect. =P I really liked the stanzas. As for the rest, I have no idea what to comment on. I apologise, once again. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I think this one is amazing. Good job

I gave this poem a five I loved the meaning behind it, there were a few spelling issues but for the most part Yoy did well. Question after you wrote this you had a big smile on your face? I think you did am I right Plot121