Comments : My thought were wrong..again

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Sad poem but its written well to express the emotions! Great job.

    you said this:
    his behaviour..

    the way he talks wid me (romanticly)
    the way he knows what am i thinking ..
    the way he understands me...
    they way he touches me ,..whenevery he can..
    they way he waits for me after school...to walk wid me..
    the way he phones me and talks with me.,..
    the way he smiles to me even from distance..
    the way he speaks ma name..like he'll die for it!!
    who's good at making me laugh..(good at jokes)
    who's also little naughty..but still good..

    who' shares his problems with me...
    who listens to my problems...and is on my side..
    the way he suddenly kisses me/hugges me with supprise!!..

    the one who's always there whenever i need him...
    who'll giv me hug or kisses whenever i need it..

    and is always with me...even if we are apart..

    I just wanted to say i think that this would make an awesome poem... you should try it! =D

    xoxo xxEvilAngelxx