Hmm...I didn't quite understand what you're trying to grasp here, but it was alright.

[For once, i could see you and hug you for a {litlle} while]
^^Should be {little}. The flow was okay, but not the greatest. I didn't know who you were talking about with 'they,' either. Hmm...Keep it up. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

So much emotions here..
Its good to see you write again..
Keep it up..
Youre getting better and better..

God Bless!

Wow this poem was really good, i really felt what you were trying to get across

Awww very deep and touching, I liked it and you discribed how you are feeling...
Karms.

I feel somethin g on this one coz I cry last night lols but the truth is this was a great poem with lots of emotion very well penned great job

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Geneross

Wow i like this one i can rly relate good job 5/5

Wow.. This was really sad. Nicely done though. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Nicely done.

Pretty sad, but good. :)

Great peom 5/5

Deep, emotional . I like how yur givin` yher tears voice . Love it .
..ღ__MiNDYY

So sad it made me cry! but thats a good thing.

That is a very good poem....i guess

5/5 great poem lots of emotion

Bravo! Now this was excellent! It was filled with deep emotion, there weren't many errors, and it flowed beautifully. 5/5 Keep writing like this and I'll keep reading.

Love
Letty

Its very meaningful, and I can feel your emotion as I read it. Please though, spelling counts. I lost the flow of your writing when I came upon your errors.
Keep it up! I would like to see more!

Very emotianal, and meaningful poem! A great read! Great flow all through it. Keep it up! xx

Very nice poem but i dnt understand what it is doing in the slang cetegory it could do well somewhere else as well :) well done

Wow I know what you
are talking about

I wasnt really sure at times what you were talking about in some places. I didnt think it should be in hte slang catogory i think it should be placed somewhere else. The emotion was great and meaningful Good effort~mel

Cliche, but not too bad. I'm not too sure what else to say, but if I were you, I'd get away from cliche.
For, when you aren't writing cliche like, you do an amazing job. Particarly on nature poems.=]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5