Comments : The Line

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Aw. I loved this poem.
    Very calm in a way.

    Neither earth or water to comfort
    To hold me close
    To rock me to sleep
    As the sea did so long ago

    ^This part was nice.

    Take care.
    I gave a 5.

    N-G-C-S.