This poem is very profound ...as always I love the way your free verse flows

I love the way you write your poems!!!
its amazing... and the flow was good too

Very good poem. That is fairly easy to understand. This poem also has great rhythm and form. Please keep the great work. You are a great poet:) 5/5

An awesome use of imagery once again! I think you just have a way with descriptive words. If only I knew what you were describing! x.x

You say you want honesty. then fine.your poems are very pretty. they almost Sparkle. There is alot of unusual words and imagry used in it. superficialy it is a good poem. it almost conceals the fact that it really says nothing at all. or makes no sense. I mean what does a cat have to do with autumn, or forgetting you?

Another thing i noticed in a couple of your other poems is that you have a tendency to describe a scene in too much detail. use a few of the right words instead. and the readers mind will colour the picture in itself
Rocky
Love is the law. Love under will.