I Want My Sister Back

by Mousie   Oct 15, 2006


My friends encourage me
But that one stands alone
Shooting down my choices
Disapproving of my life.
No support is felt from her
Yet she's my cloest,
My second half.
Will she ever change?
Can't she just accept him?
Will she even make the effort?
Does she care?
I want my sister back.

=/ tough time right now... i wish she could just accept things.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    I hate it when people you love don't accept your choices. It's your decision. Not theirs. But keep ya head up.. LOL Great job on this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. You may want to recheck your spelling. You could also make it a little longer between the topic needs to be more clear. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Very powerful poem. Loads of emotian included in it. I really like it because it was quite short and yet its so good. So meaningful. Keep it up! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is very sad! Have you tried talking to her and telling here how you really feel? Or you can try writing her a note, explaining the way you feel. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was full of deep meaning. Keep up the good work.

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very short but it has meaning. Very well written. 5/5
    God Bless,
    Taylor

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