This is a great poem, short but to the point. I'm very sorry to ehar your going through this im in the same position right now but it's my bestfriend who is like a sister, sometimes you just gotta keep going whether they like it or not and deal.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Aww...so sad but yet very good, short, and simple poem. Good flow and choice of words. I like it. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar

Ok i will that ur sis will be back..hehe great emotion and i think very nicely written great job... 5/5 keep it up

Very short but it has meaning. Very well written. 5/5
God Bless,
Taylor

This is very sad! Have you tried talking to her and telling here how you really feel? Or you can try writing her a note, explaining the way you feel. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was full of deep meaning. Keep up the good work.

Letty

Very powerful poem. Loads of emotian included in it. I really like it because it was quite short and yet its so good. So meaningful. Keep it up! xx

Pretty good. You may want to recheck your spelling. You could also make it a little longer between the topic needs to be more clear. Keep it up

I hate it when people you love don't accept your choices. It's your decision. Not theirs. But keep ya head up.. LOL Great job on this poem.