Wake up!

by Mousie   Oct 15, 2006


Wake up each morning
Feeling the exhaustion
Consume my body.
Stresses of the coming day
Flooding my memory.
Happiness of knowing
I'm loved by someone
Flutters through my veins.
Exerting myself to the fullest
I carry this class load.
My choices haunt me
My friends encourage me
But one does not.
Through this cycle
My body funs
Hour to hour
Day to day,
And soon this constant cycle
Must end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great poem by you, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    I like it.. I don't really get it. But it's a good poem. I guess you don't really have to understand it, it's still a poem. Great write

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Great poem ! Short but to the point. I too feel like I wake up and go through the same rituals everyday. You have written an excellent poem. 5/5

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very well done! 5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    This is anothet great job. it flowed well and i think it nicely written5/5

    god bless

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