Bittersweet

by Clarissa   Oct 15, 2006


She is an angel
A gorgeous soft piece of life

She is a devil
As she lets her goodness fade

Whats left of you is sweet nothingness and your sinking slowly
going nowhere fast!
I try to catch you, but you slip reach of my hands.

Dear Lover, Sweet angel
Abuse me and hit me, so I can
bring you down with me
I take such rage and I lay you down
Nobody is looking, as its you and I
Rage steamed into passion

I love you
I hate you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmmm the last line make me smile nice writtten yah! well just keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Whoa very nice work here, very nice with the love hate thing coming through in this poem... Keep it up...
    Karms.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww hunny! It's sad, powerful, yet loving all at the same time! Well done! But I do feel horrible for you. It sounds like you love him, but he's abusive. =( I hope this isn't true. If it is, I'm here to help.

    The flow was good in most places, but could be improved. I still liked it though. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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