Awwww. Ren, darling. That was amazing. Simple, but like super deep in there. =|. It's awesome.
Heart, Jessica.

Ren that poem was full of meaning u will become a great poet that was soo deep

Very well done, a clear meaning, and not too heavy to read either. very well done.

Good poem.
peace out
anna soffe

Love it. u captured the feeling that society lays on us.

Pretty cool. Never read anything like that before. I liked it! :)

~~Spanish