Very well written. I loved it. Sorry I don't have much to say but I have so many other poems to comment. Thank you for the comment, it was greatly appreciated! 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

I liked reading this poem. Good job and the flow was good too.

Arsalan D.

Even though most may say it should be in sad poems, i think it fits here because it is a part of many people's lives. people deal with rejection and i love this poem because u convey great emotion throughout the entire poem makign me feel as if i am the person being rejected and because of that i felt as if i was gonna cry becuse it felt so real to me. sorry for so many words but this is what i felt when i read this poem. at the high school where i attend we are learning how to show and not just tell a story or emion... and i belive u showed it very welll awesome job... 5/5

A great, sad, touching poem. i can actually relate to this a lot. usually i read poems and i'm like 'ye thatd be bad to experience' but with this one, i know who u feel.

tho its relatively short by the standards of people round this place these days, its powerful and thought-provoking.

keep writing!! 5/5
xxx

Wow..this was a crzy poem ...it was really worded rite and everything...i think i can get along with yew...lol...keep it up...

I liked this poem .
It was touching, and many can relate .
I don`t know what other things to sey xD But nicely done .

&&Thank yu for the comment . It was honest and I really appreciate it .
..ღ__MiNDYY

I like the whole concept of the poem, but the rhyming here is so cliche. It really seems forced.

She's unnoticed in a corner so dark,
All because of those evil remarks.
Tears roll down her face inside,
She's unnoticed in a corner so dark,
All because of those evil remarks.
Tears roll down her face inside,
And that is how she divides

I understood the first, second, and third line of this stanza, but I didn't get the meaning of the last.

And that is how she divides

That is how she divides what?
What is that she divides?

This sentence seems to be redundant to me. I may not be seeing the real picture here or something, but I really didn't get the last line. It could be because of the forced rhyming. Which also threw off the flow a little. I love the structure of the poem and the picture that you are trying to paint. But with lines like that it kind of makes the picture a little hazy to the reader.

She lets no one discover,
What really is under,
Those miles and miles,
Of fake little smiles.

This stanza has the most cliche's out of all the rest. I believe that you should have worded it better, put a little more emotion into this stanza. You shouldn't have forced the rhymes, you should just let them flow naturally. Because it seems like you focused more on the rhyming then on the whole concept of the poem. I believe that this could be a excellent poem with a little work on the rhyming scheme and just a bit more emotion in some parts.

Don't get me wrong. I think that this is a very good poem, I just don't think it's excellent.

I hope my comments dosen't upset you. But I did promise to be honest. I expect the same honesty from you. 4/5

Keep writing hun, but just let it flow. Don't force it.

Best wishes
Letty

WOW!
This was amazing, and i bet a lot of people can relate.
I have nothing bad to say about this, everything was perfect. Loved it loved it loved it!

More of a sad poem, yes, but it does have to do with life.

I liked this; it had a deep meaning to it. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

I think it has a very clear message and good vocabulary. It seems, I hate to say it, redundant on the rhymes. Don't make the poem lose its effect for rhyming. Okay?

I hope you don`t mind.. but i am going to put this poem on my nexopia.

just comment me on the poem "uhm" if you don`t want me to.

This is sad but I can see why you put it under the Life category. I am sure many people can relate to this especially teenagers. It is so hard to be young and teenagers can be so cruel. Thanks for sharing this.Nice job.

I liked its flow and wording and i don't think it should be in sad poems,it fits here
Especially i liked those

She lets no one discover,
What really is under,
Those miles and miles,
Of fake little smiles.

Good job

Ps.You're added to my favorites,i liked your style and have been looking for good friends and thought maybe you can be,would you like to be a friend of mine?
E-mail me to let me know
Have a nice day
Your-friend-to-be
Laura

Awhh this is real sad:[
but very good writing.
keep up the good work.

Omg like this is my favorite