This is an excellent poem, JL. And I really must commend you on your choice of topic. It's not something many would venture to pursue, but you did a really nice job on it. It shows us that our lives aren't always as bad as we like to believe. Someone is always having a tougher time, and if they are strong enough to overcome it then we should be able to, too.

You have captured the sentiment of autism really well in this write. It must be so difficult to be living in a world where so many our so selfish when you are dealing with any disability.
It was very generous of you to share the struggles that people with autism face on a daily basis. The flow was great and I like the words chosen that you used for rhymes

An inspirational and powerful piece. Makes one realize that there is always someone else with worse problems than your own. Wonderfully written...

Blew me away again

Wow, ur rite, i bet autistic people must feel like that, even without knowing it, cuz they are sort of trapped, because they can't do anything about it on their own. love how youy saw their perspective, and thanks for commenting on my cancer poem, i also tried to see somone else's point of view (a friend with cancer). wonderfully written, i liked it.

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