Now THIS poem reminds me of your old style. It was excellent and proving a good point! Jpoet*

My favourite one out of your more latest ones.
It's original (as always)
clear
and has your special hidden meaning...
Well done!
5/5
~Emma

Hey
Thanks for your comments I appreicate constructive critism as well so thank you!

I like this poem i think it is very sad but also very true. You really drive your point home throught this poem.
5/5

Kelly
xx