I love the mystical feel to this. It's like you're in a dream and you follow the moonbeam. It creates an air of serenity around a person. Beautiful.

Another unique write and it was such a good idea. It is like an invitation to a peacful, secluded destiny that is top secret. Loved it as usual!!!

"where apollo once chased the chaste
before she became a rooted tree
where adam and eve touched so close
damning all of history"
This is my favorite line of yours. I really enjoyed this poem.

:) Astryd