by Ashley Ann Oct 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Ok I did this kind of fast for a contest and its format is just plain random. But I tried..here it is:(and the title was given in the contest I just gave it a poem.) |
Very sad, and and very emotional. Great write. You really capture the readers attention. Keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by *Charisma*
Awww...it's sad and kinda a "bring a tear to the eye" poem..honestly, I like it better than your other contest poem. It's just very nice! Jpoet* |