Nice words thanks for sharing

Eg together again
after my darkest mistakes
and yet you forgave me
all the pain i caused you
but again together
now and for ever
as we go through life
side by side
grow old together

As i read your peice a smile came to my face. The emotion is strong and i could feel the love and passion as i read your words. thank you so much for giving me the chance to read your work. it was great!

Wow this is soo good. you are such an amazing writer. i really like what you said in this poem. so wonderful. 5/5

~Kristina

This is a pretty good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! great flow, keep it up!!!

Together we will concur are fears
togather we will conquer our fear
conquer(i am not sure how to spell it either)

Sorry forgot to add the rest
The flow was great, the word choice was amazing, the emtion was strong, and the message was clear 5/5