by Ashley Ann Oct 15, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
about life
CONTEST POEM: |
Hey it fits under funny poems.. haha i didnt look., but that^^ is your comment. =] |
I dont know if this is how you wanted the theme of this poem to be but i see it as a funny poem.. the !'s have a big part in this along with the tendancy of simple language.. it makes it seem slightly childish-therefore funny.. but as a funny type poem its very good.. but i dont know if that means much if it isnt.. |