Dead.

by milly   Oct 15, 2006


Everything is misty and I can't hear a sound,
I seem to be floating just above the ground,
I'm not sure what's going on, I cannot see,
But I'm surrounded by my friends and family,
They're all looking at something though I can't see what,
Something seems wrong, everyone's crying a lot,
All the people are ignoring me, I feel abused,
What's going on? I'm so confused,
I don't like this anymore, I want to get out,
But no one hears as I try to shout,
The people part and my heart starts to pound,
A box with my name on it is lying in the ground,
As the truth hits me I can't help but scream,
I'm dead, this is real and life just a dream.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, that is deep. Very well written, the flow and rhymes where great. Although the structure was not that well, perhaps try breaking it into stanzas. Other than that wonderful poem.

    Ciao, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by David b

    Nice poem liked it alot 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great job! It has a lot of meaning in it and very deep! Keep writing you are very talented