by milly Oct 15, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Everything is misty and I can't hear a sound, |
Wow, that is deep. Very well written, the flow and rhymes where great. Although the structure was not that well, perhaps try breaking it into stanzas. Other than that wonderful poem. |
by David b
Nice poem liked it alot 5/5 |
by SSSAAMMMYY
Great job! It has a lot of meaning in it and very deep! Keep writing you are very talented |