Comments : Dead.

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great job! It has a lot of meaning in it and very deep! Keep writing you are very talented

  • 18 years ago

    by David b

    Nice poem liked it alot 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, that is deep. Very well written, the flow and rhymes where great. Although the structure was not that well, perhaps try breaking it into stanzas. Other than that wonderful poem.

    Ciao, Joe