by emmerz Oct 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
These thoughts now running through my head |
Wow, loved this 1 aswell, i can relate to it well, the flow and rhythm were great, keep it up |
I really liked this one. It flows well and the rhymes are unforced. |
Wonderful poem. I liked it. The flow was ok, but needs some work. Good Job. |
by Cheyanne
Wow this is an excellent poem....i cant believe u only got a 4:s.....this poem is not only realistic.....but itz very easy to relate to...i exspecially like the way you ended it:)well ill be looking forward to reading more of your work...keep up the good work your doing great:)5/5.....p.s---thanks so much for the comment on my poem i was glad that someone could relate to it:) |
I KN0W H0W Y0U FEEL! KEEP iT UP! |