Comments : Better left unsaid [lyrics]

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think I'd put it under desired love

    It's go time, it's time to move
    What will you say, will you feel it too?

    because these lines make it sound like you really want to be with him. Good job! Jpoet*

  • I really like it...i know exactly how u feel

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I KN0W H0W Y0U FEEL! KEEP iT UP!

    MAKE-ME-CRY*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow this is an excellent poem....i cant believe u only got a 4:s.....this poem is not only realistic.....but itz very easy to relate to...i exspecially like the way you ended it:)well ill be looking forward to reading more of your work...keep up the good work your doing great:)5/5.....p.s---thanks so much for the comment on my poem i was glad that someone could relate to it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful poem. I liked it. The flow was ok, but needs some work. Good Job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I really liked this one. It flows well and the rhymes are unforced.
    Your sentiment is clearly expressed and sweet. kep it up.

  • Wow, loved this 1 aswell, i can relate to it well, the flow and rhythm were great, keep it up