I love it, it is perfect.

This is a great poem and i think friend should be nice to eachother well atleast thats wat ive been told lol well good job:D

keenan

I\'m making the assumption that this is about people b~tching behind their best friends backs to their other friends.

Interesting theme to write on, and something which I\'m sure everyone has experienced.

You did a good job writing in freeverse as it stopped you being restricted at all.

You could expand a little bit more on the topic, simply because it is covered in the same way quite often.

I was very glad to see you didn\'t overuse punctuation which is always a plus.

Well done on your write, keep writing and improving.

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I love this poem...

its kinda sweet,

but kinda pissy...

my kind of poem!

and it is absolutely perfect