Comments : What Once Was

  • 18 years ago

    by alone in the crowd

    That was incredible! i fell in love with this poem! i felt as if it was wrote for me! i think everyone feels this way at one point or another. it is wonderful! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Garrison

    Thank you... it's true to my feelings. A long distance relationship that had a hurdle that makes it next to impossible.

    It feels so unfair because she is good for me and good to me.

    I wrote what I felt, and then tried different adjectives to really describe my heart.